Stitches - Is my story good?

Is my story good?

For my class we had to write a story about recycling that will be read to a 3rd grade class. It had to include 4 ways to recycle and 4 reasons to. Do you like it? Should I change or add anything? Each paragraph thing is a page, and I will have illustrations. The title is 'Captain Recycle Pants and the evil Trash Munchkin'. Captain Recycle Pants was a superhero that loves to recycle. He reused, reduced, and recycled everything. He and his friends even had recycling contests. But not everybody liked recycling as much as them. The evil Trash Munchkin, Captain Recycle Pants’ enemy, never reused, reduced, or recycled. He just threw all his trash on the floor of his house. Soon, the trash started piling up. The Trash Munchkin’s house got so gross and dirty that none of the other evil villains wanted to visit him. When Captain Recycle Pants found out, he hurried over to the Trash Munchkin’s home. “We have to recycle all of this!” Captain Recycle Pants said. “I don’t know how to recycle.” Said the evil Trash Munchkin. So Captain Recycle Pants showed him how. They cut leftover pizza boxes into Frisbees. They used old balls of yarn to knit blankets. “What are we doing this for?” the Trash Munchkin asked. “It saves energy. Also, if nobody ever recycles anything, the trash will just pile up and invade animal’s homes.” Captain Recycle Pants explained. “Recycling also helps reduce pollution and save trees that are used to make paper.” Said Captain Recycle Pants. “What are some other ways to recycle?” the Trash Munchkin asked. “Put your trash into the green garbage bins that are taken to factories which reuse aluminum and plastic materials.” Captain Recycle Pants told him. “You can also use less paper to save more trees. When you are writing on a sheet of paper, use the front and back.” Said Captain Recycle Pants. After cleaning up all the garbage that was on his floor, the Trash Munchkin learned that recycling his trash was the best thing to do.

Public Comments

cant even get through the first sentence. blah its hideous
its cute, i think it will help them understand :)!
it's great!!
Well Why would Captain Recycle pants even help his enemy. I probably wouldn't.
it was cute!
Yes, it's very good. You did a great job!
I like it!