Stitches

Rate my Poem called... Talking to myself?

I'll start by saying I aint had a friend,since the tender age of ten when I buried my closest kin and ever since then I ve been drifting in the wind just a blowing wandering but never sure of where im goin so nowadays im all alone by myself my pain is heart felt no one inquires about my health so when I get this wealth people need to leave me alone dont call my cellular phone I never had a stable home my only friend is stainless chrome, equipped with deadly repelants which of these women is sincere,I swear there really aint no tellin so I turn around and keep steppin,in the opposite direction of these fakers cause back when I needed peoples help there were'nt any takers surviving off of nothing its the truth and im far from bluffing I could hear the women chuckling now this nothing is a something through my veins,my blood is still is pumping thats all I really need all by my lonely sippin my drink, may even blow some weed and keepin all these fake friends out my life and we can fornicate woman but you'll never be my wife you cant play me for a fool and leave with all my riches l cant find a real woman ,all I see is fake b*tches I give my enemies stitches im burning-down all bridges and my weapons protect my riches I'm gonna shoot before I get killed im not a stranger to-missing meals but I aint I never like the handcuffs or the jail cells either so I flee the scene,after I use my nine millimeter cause when im cold its my heater I have no problem hugging myself and Its been that way ever since the day my momma killed herself lord knows I cant decipher friends from foes tell me who is to blame im really hurting but I havent gone insane its a shame, that I live this way I only talk to myself in my head, every single night and every day all the time

Public Comments

1. I like it I give it a 8
2. I like its meaningfulness, but it is a lttle choppy
3. its lovely you got all your anger out on paper. peolpe go through really tough time and i dont blame you for seeing fake peolpe there all around us some time we dont notice til it to late but not u. you make shure your self and your feeling are put first for protection but smoking pot and guns aint no way to fix the problems in the world that just adding on . from what i read your better the that so keep on writing poem and exspressing your fellings:)
4. I think drinking is bad for you and will add to your problems, you would be better off only smoking weed as it is more natural and more healthy because it doesnt kill braincells or cause cancer